I walk Alone
I walk Alone
I walk Alone
My brain is burning
my mind is spinning
and this is all too confusing
I walk alone through
this empty path
the ghost of my shadow
mimicking every step i take
Trees have fallen and the echos
whisper my name
I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk alone
I came to a town
it has a look of being upside down
and my heart screams to turn around
I pass people who are not really there
But i can't help but stare
I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk alone
The buildings are crumbling
my mind is unfolding and this is all to confusing
I walk through the city of darkness
The lights have all burned out
and many doors have locked me out
but I'd rather stay behind closed doors
I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk through the empty street
stepping on broken picture frames and glass
kicking things that lay in my path
my brain is burning
my mind is spinning
and this is all too confusing
I walk alone
I walk alone
I walk alone
I look up to the stars
everything looks too far away
I reach up to grab a star
and only air appears in my hand
This is not what its about
I cant give up my life because of self doubt
I need to live my life
So what i walk alone
So what i walk alone
So what i walk alone
This is my town
I choose if it should be upside down
or if i want it all to turn around
there all my doors
and Ive hidden all the keys
Its all up to me to unlock them Its all up to me to keep myself closed
Its all up to me
Its all up to me
So what
I walk alone
So what
I walk alone
So what Now
I like this a lot. I really like how it's laid out. It draws your eye. It's very visually appealing. Thanks!
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I really like this. I like how it just kind of goes. It rhymes. And you can tell you spent time on it.
ReplyDeletecahhhhhuteeee!!!
ReplyDeleteLove the format. I pass people who are not really there
ReplyDeleteBut i can't help but stare....I feel like I know exactly what you mean! Sweet stuff, keep it up.
I like the format, and at the end when you said "so what I walk alone, so what I walk alone, so what I walk alone." It's very uplifting in the end. Thanks
ReplyDeleteI love how you've arranged the words and described how it is. Great job.
ReplyDeleteSo good! Your words just flow so well!
ReplyDeleteI love the ending. This is really good. I loved how you said "I cant give up my life because of self doubt I need to live my life"
ReplyDeleteProbably my favorite line. I love this. Keep up the good work.